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Word Play by ~Sykoticstalker27:iconSykoticstalker27:

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I choose your lovely

         Naughty lips

         and yield to the taste

                              of pleasure.
©2007-2009 ~Sykoticstalker27
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I wrote this while playing with magnetic words.

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~Kmeljora-Sintaro Sep 18, 2007, 5:21:35 AM
:giggle: that's actually pretty good XD

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"And as I looked-up to the sky seeking guidance, another angel was shot down by human greed."
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~Sykoticstalker27 Sep 18, 2007, 8:54:16 AM
:D Thank you.

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"The liver is a very important organ. You can't live without it. Hence the name." -House
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~operaclassical Sep 20, 2007, 7:42:54 AM
Simplistic yet powerful! Fav

btw AREN'T MAGNETIC WORDS WAY TOO MUCH FUN?

They make-eth me smiiilee :D

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"Reality is merely an illusion, albeit a very persistent one."
-Albert Einstein
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~Sykoticstalker27 Sep 20, 2007, 9:49:38 AM
:D I know I could play with them all day.

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"The liver is a very important organ. You can't live without it. Hence the name." -House
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~0Hamster0 Sep 21, 2007, 11:39:06 AM
:? What's a "magnetic word"?

The title's perfect: it's a lot better than, say, "syntax play", anyways. :D "Play" is also a strong reference to the allusion in the poem, methinks. :)

Is 'choose' a magnetic word? Because it sure is attracting my curiosity.

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98% of those who believe this statistic are gullible.

Kuulilennuteetunneliluuk!

Dank je... nog eens. ^^
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~bloodvayne Sep 21, 2007, 2:54:08 PM
wow... looks like im gonna hafta buy me some magnetic words. nicely done.

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...no one said that this life was easy, but did that no one ever live a life this hard... ~jawbreaker - ashtray monument
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~Sykoticstalker27 Sep 21, 2007, 6:57:52 PM
Well magnetic words is where you get about 100 magnets and each one has a different word or punctuation mark written on it.

Then you try to form sentences or stories or poems with the words.

(There's an online version on facebook that I use - less chance of losing one of the words. :D)

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"The liver is a very important organ. You can't live without it. Hence the name." -House
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~Sykoticstalker27 Sep 21, 2007, 7:01:25 PM
Thank you! :aww:

And I just use online version on Facebook.

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"The liver is a very important organ. You can't live without it. Hence the name." -House
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~bloodvayne Sep 21, 2007, 7:56:28 PM
that's not as fun. but still... A+!

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...no one said that this life was easy, but did that no one ever live a life this hard... ~jawbreaker - ashtray monument
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