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Suicide Note by ~Sykoticstalker27:iconSykoticstalker27:

Categories Literature > Poetry > Horror & Macabre > Fixed


Mom, Do I have to say
How sorry I am?
I know that this hurt you
Though that wasn't the plan

I was going to be strong
I was going to go on...

Please tell Cam,
The blame is my own
He was the perfect big brother
I only wish
That I had told him so

I had always thought
That I'd make it in the end
Guess I was wrong
All over again

Mom, it's not your fault
So please don't think it is
And one more thing
Tell dad...
That the baby was his
©2006-2009 ~Sykoticstalker27
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Author's Comments

Somethings can never be endured.

This is the first thing I've posted in a while so please tell me what you think.

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=Grishend Jul 25, 2006, 5:37:16 AM
This one sounds really nice. Great writing indeed! :D

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~Sykoticstalker27 Jul 25, 2006, 6:37:34 AM
Thank you!

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"The liver is a very important organ. You can't live without it. Hence the name." -House
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~absenceofmortality Jul 25, 2006, 7:43:17 AM
good, very good

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~TehSakky Jul 25, 2006, 10:34:41 AM
Whoa... So sad, and the last line is jaw-dropping. Love it!

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DRUGS.IN.YOUR.HEAD. :heart:
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~Sykoticstalker27 Jul 25, 2006, 11:30:10 AM
:blushes: Thank you!

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"The liver is a very important organ. You can't live without it. Hence the name." -House
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~Sykoticstalker27 Jul 25, 2006, 11:31:49 AM
Thanks!

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"The liver is a very important organ. You can't live without it. Hence the name." -House
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~Kmeljora-Sintaro Jul 25, 2006, 12:39:51 PM
When someone writes a suicide note like this before the attempt, it means they still care and know that other people care also (otherwise they wouldn't feel a note is necessary) they don't really want to die but see-it as... I wouldn't say the only way out but as the only way to get a message through.

:hug: I don't know if there really is much anything I can do for someone like you from so far away... but I hope you can at least take my words and find some kind of comfort in them.
You've stuck around and given constant support on my work and on many other people's works all over the place, but something tells me you're the one who needs that support the most, even if you'll never admit-it.

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"Silence is a crime." - Graveninage, by Sonata Arctica
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~TehSakky Jul 25, 2006, 4:08:07 PM
No prob! :heart:

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Stoooop with the druuuuugs.
DRUGS.IN.YOUR.HEAD. :heart:
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~Sykoticstalker27 Jul 25, 2006, 5:31:09 PM
What can I say? I find it easier to help than be helped.

And thank you. :hug:

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"The liver is a very important organ. You can't live without it. Hence the name." -House
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~Kmeljora-Sintaro Jul 25, 2006, 9:32:32 PM
No one is perfect dear, everyone eventually needs a helping hand, a little support and a nice big shot of whiskey to get you drunk and over it! :ahoy: :lmao:

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"Silence is a crime." - Graveninage, by Sonata Arctica
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